Assalamualaikum, nak share one essay written by me.
To me, thi is quite a long essay
Agak agak, what band will i get for this essay?You think?
THE EFFECT OF
TECHNOLOGICAL DEVELOPMENTS
In this globalization era, an
extraordinary technological developments have greatly increased human lifestyle
in various aspects such as in communication, transportation and education. This
scenario has obviously changed society’s attitude. Some people become more
reluctant because they are too rely on the technology to go to their
destination while others believe that they can stay keep in touch with anyone
they want to, with those provided sophisticated facilities. Thus, by
introducing the phenomenon to be discussed, I am inclined to believe that, the
prodigious technological developments are very convenient to society for
communicating, but the advancement in transportation causes traffic jam.
An equally significant aspect of
technological developments are convenient to society is due to the
communication among society, nowadays. The sentiment expressed in the quotation
embodies the view that, people often interact with their family and pals
through social website which can access via mobile phone instead of using
computer. There is an instance where I have encountered, most of people sharing
photos, information and common interest through Facebook, Twitter, and blog as
these application can connect them with people from all over the world.
Indubitably, those modern methods are the most widely used by society to
communicate with others, today. Thus, accordingly I am convinced that
technology today, makes our life more convenient especially in communication.
There is also however a further
point to be considered which is technological advancements cause traffic jam. A contrary explanation is
that, as the world is developing, the various types of superb vehicles created are
also increasing. Meanwhile, the new version of multipurpose cars has attracted many
people to buy on their own. Indeed, people did not like to car pool which is
eventually increased the number of car users on the road. As a result, the
increasing number of the car users on the road causes traffic jam. Therefore,
there is no doubt that technological developments also have drawback in
transportation which is causes the traffic jammed.
In conclusion, the technological
developments have both pros and cons. We, as the users of those superb
technological developments, play an indispensable role in making them worth for
us. Each of us should realize how lucky we are to have the chances to consume
those facilities compared to people who live about a century ago. Nevertheless,
we should also be aware about the impact of those inventions which we will
confront in the future perpetually.
*What do you personally think about this essay?
*If there is any mistake, do correct me. You may express your idea or words suggestion.
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